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Pencil X
December 15th, 2003, 01:45 AM
http://www.daxerxesdimension.homestead.com/files/Superman___.jpg

Pencils to Colors Erik V. Lehmann (me)

Forge
December 15th, 2003, 02:32 AM
euh just something is disturbing me... legs... don't know exactly how to fix it but there is something strange...

Bo Degn
December 15th, 2003, 02:46 AM
his muscle structure is wrong... both on his arms and on his upper legs. otherwise nice line and rendering. :-) just study some anatomy and youll be allright...

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hyphen
December 15th, 2003, 03:01 AM
actually the arms aren't that wrong. however, the pectoralis major does shouldn't be connected like that to the anterior deltoid. it should actually sort of slip under it.

the legs are off, yes. i think the main problem with this pic, though, is the forshortening. on the body and legs. the cape should be tighter against his shoulder too, to give a sense of faster movement [as the movement lines below him suggest].

though, i like this comic-book style rendering. keep up the good work.

AfroLaxMan
December 15th, 2003, 12:33 PM
what I noticed is his left knee is darker than his right knee, giving the impression it is in the background. This throws your illusion off badly.
try to darken his right leg a touch, lighten up his left leg, and see that helps.