My stuff part 2

[madpencil]

I posted this stuff before but I added one more piece at the bottom of the page. It's not 100% done but it's almost there and I wanted to share it with you guys. It's the mech-air-balloon piece.

http://www.geocities.com/madpencil2003/Concept

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[madpencil]

Ok the link is fixed!

[Form]

these are great

1 crit

on the last one, the mast that comes down from the balloon to hold the "basket" seems to go straight down, yet the hole it comes from would suggest it was angled out towards the viewer. If anything, there should be stretchmarks where the balloon flesh is being pulled down from the top. lemm eknow if you want me to do a brief photoshop edit to show you what i mean.

peace-form

[madpencil]

I agree about the angle, I saw that but decided to post it before It's done. There can't be any pulling down effect because it's a ball of metal.

[Rusty Red Robot]

Very nice pics! Solid designs on all. I love the color in the second piece. I agree with form_n_focus about the last pic, though. The perspective of the mast/basket don't match that of the balloon.

[Form]

if its a metal ball it shouldnt have crease lines mwa-hey mblerk. :D

[madpencil]

Thank you all for your comments. Visit my official site to view my current comic book work.

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