old dsg

[trevor]

well ive tried and failed to post time and again but this time i got it
this is an old dsg god goddess wind
3hrs pencil, bristol, photoshophttp://www.trevorclaxton.netfirms.com/drawings/characters/wind_slave.jpg

what do ya think? my first post

trevor

[shadyj129]

My only suggestion is to make the girl stand out a bit more. Took me a few seconds to even notice she was there. Overall though, freakin' amazing, great job.

[chudzta]

The concept is good. The styling a little fantasy-ish which isnt my flavor but to some people its art so i cant complain. Lose the photoshop leaves in the bg and the other likes. They are cheap and phony and yuck. Apologies.. if those arent ps leaves but im assuming so. Piece - Chudds

[Rusty Red Robot]

That is really cool. I know that's not deep commentary, but it certainly describes the pic well. Cool style and nice colors for the piece. Great work.

[GiR]

i like it!

[DavidCousens]

Nice job! I agree with shadyj129, the image is really nice but it took me a few seconds to notice the goddess.

Maybe fade the colours immediately behind her just to make her stand out a bit more. Other than that though, great stuff! :)

Dave(The Original)

[EVIL]

I think the leaves and the magical symbols and stuff really fit the image. The most anoying thing was that the creature on the background is symmetrical.

[MindCandyMan]

very very cool!

[Seraph]

extremly great!

[trevor]

thanx guys
first off
evil: i got really lazy and only drew half the monster
i just mirrored it so you win the "i discovered trevor is lazy" prize
shady and dave : i did this rather quickly so i was just thinking of color
on the drawing and not so much on her standing out....they are equally impotant but seeing as how he is the slave and mimmicks he movements i should have placed moe emphasis on her
chudza: yer right cheap and ps leaves....i was just bored and playing aound
i have, mostly, in the past used ps professionally for photo etouch and prepress
and i was expeimenting with new brushes
you will no doubt notice it again in my next post


thanx all

[trevor]

and i have also just noticed the "r" key on my keyboard is giving out i have to hit it very hard
sorry

[DavidCousens]

Just checked out your website Trev, nice stuff. I love your style! :cool:

Dave(The Original) who really will get a website together as soon as his next project is done!

[egerie]

Oh trevor this is looking great ! Would you agree to a bigger resolution somewhere for the sake of a nice desktop background ? ;) Please ?

[trevor]

egerie,
since i am not the one posting them on my site, i dont have a choice on size(i email my stuff to spinefinger or my roommate<whichever has time and they put them up for me,im webtarded) so its not possible now but ill figure all that stuff out soon enough

you should check out my other thread in its finally finishrd and tell me what you think

[Forge]

i like it ! five stars to don't fade in history;)

[-The Swift-]

1st post!?? where have you been! you rule!!!!!!!!!!