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A.pipe
December 13th, 2003, 03:06 PM
C&C needed.

http://www.chinavfx.com/bbs/attachments/200312/16014342-AntediluvianS.jpg

Phuzion
December 13th, 2003, 05:08 PM
That's pretty wicked. I like it.

As far as c&c goes... get rid of that line pointing to the bridge of his nose, it's too distracting. Also, his hair is blowing to the right, but nothing else is. His robes are still, the loin cloth on the dead woman is still, but then there's a cloth on the left that is blowing the other way. The texture and all that is working nicely though. Perhaps you could push the lighting even more? Make it a little more dramatic. Nice work though. Peace

A.pipe
December 14th, 2003, 12:46 AM
hey, thanks Phuzion

here is a little update.
added more colors and details
some errors have been fixed.

need more C&C......thx

here is a close look of his head
http://www.chinavfx.com/bbs/attachments/200312/15004953-AntediluvianHeadS.jpg

Seraph
December 14th, 2003, 09:55 AM
(new to the forum, so... hi)

Well, although this is way beyond anything I could do at the present time, I can still crit it. I think it rocks, except for the chopped-down woman. She looks like a giant, so I think you should make her a bit smaller :P

A.pipe
December 15th, 2003, 11:57 AM
really thanks guys.
it's almost done.have added some textures and more colors.

hi Seraph

she is a dead female werewolf, maybe a queen of werewolfs...
maybe a huge werewolf champion....

:)