Kane973

[KANE973]

Well these are some earlier art pieces of the work I did, I would highly appreciate any feedback that I can get!

If you see any of my characters constantly of times it might be because I'm trying to perfect my style through her or him.

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[Blythe]

Good start, welcome to CA!

Anatomy! You need to spend some time studying it, loomis is good to start also drawing from life and/or posemaniacs will help you understand the human body more. your characters are pretty cool but right now they are lacking in proportions,as they still look a bit awkward.

looking forward to seeing more!

[gmc9987]

You have very clean, deliberate lines, which is a very good thing. Very confident. Are you drawing these traditionally or digitally?

Like Blythe said you should study some anatomy. PoseManiacs is a good site, but I find characterdesigns.com to be a better reference site if you have to use photos, mainly because posemaniacs' 3-D models don't really bend or deform the way real humans do when they move.

Specifically, the first drawing the arms are way too long. Most people's arms end about halfway down the thigh, including the hands.

The second drawing has better overall body proportions, but the head is too large. Large heads make your characters look younger, which is something to consider.

The third drawing has a nice composition. I'd like to see it rendered out and worked up more, it's very dynamic.

Hope this helps! Keep it up!