looking for help

[that_one_guy765]

this is something i did for class. just wanted to see how i can improve in drawing. I'm looking to get some feed back with this. plz let me know what i can do to improve. thanx

[Istmin52]

I think you need to push your contrast and have more values in it. Right now everything looks a little blurry and your forms are appearing kind of flat. It looks like you have only a couple of values in this. I'm also not sure what some of the objects are suppose to be. Perhaps you need to spend more time with it and define what each object is.