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5-0
December 12th, 2003, 01:02 PM
i just started doing hand art about a week ago. I have also ways been doing 3d modelling and computer graphics way before this though.

This is my first attempt at drawing. It aint so great. i also touched it up abit in photoshop but not much. c&c welcomed. I am a noob at hand art.

http://www.liquidreality-design.co.uk/girl1.jpg

please try and point me in the right direction on this thing.

Ian Mack
December 12th, 2003, 02:24 PM
I think her mouth is a little off. it's giving me the impression of a verylarge underbite.

Changing the angle of the lips would help the pic alot. it's blurry which makes it hard to see how accurate the other details are.

Fozzybar
December 12th, 2003, 04:19 PM
First tip:

"Don't scan during an earthquake!"

AnarchyAo2
December 12th, 2003, 08:44 PM
Hahaha. Great tip.

nikia
December 12th, 2003, 10:51 PM
Don't get discouraged. Practice a lot, and some anatomy books will help a great deal. Check the tutorials section out here. You'll find quit a bit of help there.

Phuzion
December 13th, 2003, 05:23 PM
right now she looks like she's going bald. Bring her hair line down a little, and put more hair on top of her head. Next, the proportions of the head are a bit off (you know that universal human head proportion ;p). Otherside's right, her chin is jutting too far forward. Here's a draw-over I did, just to show you, in a basic way how things might be fixed:

http://www.savagesunarts.com/Post/girl01.jpg

hope it helps and all makes sense. Peace ;p

F3nix
December 13th, 2003, 09:06 PM
OH man. GOT HUGE FLASHBACKS OF: THE RING.

:mad:

bhuddistmonk
December 13th, 2003, 10:12 PM
This is my advice. Dont start out with faces, those are some of the hardest things to draw. Try shapes, then move to more advanced stuff like machines or buildings and then when get decent at those, move on to faces.:chug: