View Full Version : Amita final (nudity)
Phuzion
December 12th, 2003, 03:05 AM
Ah what the hell. I posted her in the sketches section, but I figure since this his her final design, I'll post it here:
http://www.savagesunarts.com/Post/Amita_02Cd.jpg
lemme know what you think. I'm all about revisting my stuff, even if the project is finished, just to finish it up for myself. So I'm open to C&C as always. Peace
Mysen
December 12th, 2003, 04:36 AM
love it and loved all the sketches in the previous threads.. especially like the fact that shes not all plastic surgery.
keep up the great work man.
Jamie
(edit) p.s. oh.. i think her left brast might be a bit too high.. .. i dunno.. but it seems a little high to me at least.
Molly
December 12th, 2003, 06:16 AM
Hi Phuzion,
Hows it going? I like this piece of yours. Nice fuller women, lovely figure.
Her left breast is a little too high, and hasn't got as much 'hang' as her right. - But then it is fact that us females have one breast smaller than the other....lemme check..
Yep - but just a bit!!!
Love the pants tho, they're pretty cool - how about making 'em a little see-through???
Mollyx
(I love you Jonny Wilkinson...;) )
Yoko Kanno
December 12th, 2003, 08:44 AM
Those pants on the bombditty.
Skank
December 12th, 2003, 10:27 AM
i love her tattoos man!!
theres nothin better than a half naked chick with lots of tattoos..lol
good stuff man, ive enjoyed watching your progress
S.R. Braun
December 12th, 2003, 10:58 AM
those are some awesome tatoos :) I really like how organic and natural she seems all the way to the natural looking breasts.
bwkeough
December 12th, 2003, 11:35 AM
Very nice pic, great anatomy and concept to her.
two minor crits: I think the hair looks a little plastic, a few stray hairs will fix that; the shadow on the lower area of the pants are too even, looks a little flat.
Do you have more like this?
madphill
December 12th, 2003, 11:43 AM
her left breast doesn't seem to be the same shape and size as the right. I would also like to see the hair a little more "hairish" right now it's a little to helmety for me. Great work though. Those are my only nit-picks
MrFrost
December 12th, 2003, 11:52 AM
nice job on this one...i love the tats....:)
Atomicfate
December 12th, 2003, 12:18 PM
looks terrific! played the light source well :yummy:
Romulus
December 12th, 2003, 04:30 PM
NEATO! =D I like..I liked your other scetches of her too..lots of styles to her..
lol Molly..*lemme check* good one =P
My3blka
December 12th, 2003, 05:01 PM
great stuff. two crits: the suggestion someone made about making the pants slightly transparent is a good one, also the hair seems too styled and perfect for a native/tribal look. other than that its pretty awesome.
Helzer
December 12th, 2003, 05:08 PM
Wow, a real woman, it's almost shocking. Well done, Phuzion.
Phuzion
December 12th, 2003, 06:25 PM
Mysen: Hey thanks ;p Yeah you won't find any plastic women in my threads.
Molly: Thank you much! I totally see what you're saying about her breasts. I tend to do that when I tilt the shoulders, and it's something I'll certainly be more conscious of in the future. The pants do feel like they should have some transparency... hhhmmm... I wasn't going to do that with this version of her, but maybe I'll give it a shot. Thanks for the crits, and I'm glad you like it ;p
Yoko Kanno: heh heh. Thanks :D
Skank: I agree! Tatts rock... if they're done right anyway. I wasn't going to make her half naked, but I figure you can either go into battle with massive armor on, so that if you get hit, you can take it. Or you can go in with nothing, so that you can actually move and not get hit... Yeah. I guess she's just cool like that or something. Thanks for the comments ;p
S.R. Braun: gracias! yeah, it's all about natural women... They're just 100xhotter. They're my fav!
bwkeough: I agree about the hair. I was playing with her being rather tribal and badass, but also being a bit girly, ya know? Since she does live near a more technologically advanced culture, she's be influenced by it a little... But yeah, maybe I took it a little too far ;p
madphill: Thanks! I'll certainly work on that stuff.
MrFrost: Heh, thanks man. Tatts are always fun to draw/paint.
Atomicfate: Awesome... I spent a bit more time giving consideration to the light source this time around. Did a value study first and whatnot. Glad it paid off a little bit ;p Peace
Romulus: lol! You women... heh heh. Thanks ;p
My3blka: I'll certainly mess the hair up a little and play with the pants some more... hell I may even change her design a little, who knows. Thanks for the crit ;p
Helzer: Real women till the end! Croft! you're going down! Unless it's Jolie of course ;p Thanks Helzer.
Hey, Thanks for the nice turnout everyone! I really appreciate the crits and compliments. It's always enlightening to see both sides. Even if it does mean going back to the drawing board ;p Peace
cycrincy
December 13th, 2003, 12:55 AM
love. but the boobs are lil to saggy fer me( i like purkey[LMFAO])
:D
Rusty Red Robot
December 13th, 2003, 02:15 AM
This is really nice! I like the earthy tones on her. It was great to see the process in the Sketches forum, too.
Phuzion
December 13th, 2003, 11:40 AM
cycrincy: Heh heh, I'll see what I can do about that one, mate ;p
Rusty Red Robot: Thanks! I'm glad you liked the process shots.
For those that are interested, I had a thread going in the WIPs section that was based around the development of this character throughout the term: Process Thread (http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?s=&threadid=11656)
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