some pages

[ayhi]

Hi Everybody:)
here's some pages from personal comic project

http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h294/phdf/kahinlercolored.jpg

http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h294/phdf/RUYALAR3.jpg

http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h294/phdf/ruyalar3s3.jpg

[willtiggety]

Nice sequentials. storytelling is pretty clear. Draftsmanship is not bad. I don't know about some of the textures, like on the face in panel one page one. The last panel on page 2 seems a little rushed. Overall nice stuff, I could see this published. I'd like to see more.

[ayhi]

willtiggety
thanks a lot for the comment:)