the van nuys family portrait

[daspetey]

portrait of a ficticious important family
-pete
www.daspetey.com

http://www.daspetey.com/art/van_nuys.jpg

[nikia]

It's pretty dark. I'd brighten it up some. I don't know if this is a style of art where you are, but over here, the heads would be too large for the bodies and the necks are too small. I think you have a good idea, maybe rework it a bit. Hope this helps.