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acuna_read
December 11th, 2003, 03:07 PM
I realise there isnt alot of work here but would like a quick bit of feedback if possible as you guys appear to be some of if not the best in the world. Anyway this pick is just of a couple of sketches i do for a Saturday morning class at my logal community college. They took about 5 mins each the one on the left less hence i didnt finish it. The right foot on the more complete guy is well out but im haveing trouble with seeing them straight on but am practicing in mirrors!:D
If ya crit could you please bear in mind im 18 so im a bit behind i know but i have only been doing life drawing for about 2-3 months.
Thanks;)
My qucik life-drawings (http://www.cardesignforum.com/4images/details.php?image_id=62&sessionid=0923d2105b56a12388e50511602e40e8)

J.Mac
December 16th, 2003, 11:02 PM
acuna_read - that isn't bad at all, it is just kind of hard to give you alot of comments with so few drawings. i know they are short drawings, but i think you should try to be more analytical with your lines. i like how you do your lines in those 2, it is very nice. another thing you should always do is include everything feet/hands. you must start to draw them now while you are new to figure drawing. if you don't it will be that much harder later on. "imo" little more analytical lines, include the whole figure every time, and measure. hope this is helpful to you. good luck with your drawings and remember to have fun :D

-Jesse