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Angelus-Mortis
February 20th, 2009, 09:56 PM
It's hard to get critique on artwork sometimes, particularly flash. I posted on Newgrounds for help, and only got 4-5 comments that weren't really detailed.

Here is something I'm working on. I think I'll fix some of the sounds later and make them louder or quieter. Sorry for the large size, but I haven't yet optimized it, and it's very detailed.

It's mostly experimental, and I made it because I think people found my previous flashes too slow and lacking in action.

It's a WIP because I haven't colored in all of the frames or drawn in all of them yet.

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=I4C8VOUF

SalOnimaruRem
February 22nd, 2009, 06:49 PM
wow its awesome, like the colors also and the fight scene too with the music, but the fight scene i think could use a little more movement into it, am not sure how to explain this to ya since am new to this stuff.