ions ink sketches....

[ion one]

this is FINALLY stuff i wanted to draw, i did it while waiting for a computer to use for finals, please C&C, i wanna color it but dont know if ill get around too....http://www.imgmag.com/images/kinghippo/ogerweb.jpg
http://www.imgmag.com/images/kinghippo/robot-jetpackweb.jpg
http://www.imgmag.com/images/kinghippo/perpweb.jpg

[Rusty Red Robot]

Pretty cool stuff! Just a quick cit: the upper half of the robots left leg looks like it's curving inwards rather than out, which looks really odd. Cool jetpack, though!

[Chromosome]

nice line work. The big cat/demon/warrior guy is cool. I like the robot too, but agree with Rusty about the left leg, UNLESS in a profile view the thigh area is concave/convex, but the lower legs seem to be at the same angle so....... nevermind, I'm retarded. I totally lost my train of thought. Good stuff!

[gauss]

i like the robot/jetpack design, but i think it would look much better without the giant sloping shin/boot look. that kind of thing denotes a certain amount of stability and for a jetpacking robot i think a more aerodynamic approach makes better sense.

[die_with_honor]

I like the beast man. but brute strangth is no mach to intelagence but i have none

[AcidDrone]

very nice, id like to see more.
the first ones pose is a little odd though, looks uncomfortable.

[feels]

You need more line variation

[ion one]

thanks for the comments people, i do need more work in the rendering and the angles of things, but what can you do when your rushing, i guess ill just take the hits, thanks again people....