Aragorn Fanart WIP

[blinky]

Hi I'm new. This is my first post yay.

This is my first attempt to CG anything so comments nd crits are very welcome.

It is fairly large, hope you guys don't mind.

Please tell me what you think it needs. (other than to be finished:rolleyes: )
http://www.geocities.com/ewilson87/aragorn.txt

[Gr8t100]

blinky,

looks like you got a good start on things, the lighting on the face is good and looks convincing, but still try to add more to it.

Only thing that I can point out to change would be the placement of the eyes, they seem akward at this point, but it can be saved easily.

Keep us updated with your work.

[blinky]

Originally posted by Gr8t100
...Only thing that I can point out to change would be the placement of the eyes, they seem akward at this point, but it can be saved easily...

Can you explain this more? What do you see wronge with them? Iis the right eye( his right , our left) too low?

[Gr8t100]

Sorry, to be more exact it is the left eye (the viewers left) that kind of seems off. I can tell the right eye is looking at the viewer, but the left eye seems it is down too far in the corner, thats all. Hope that helps.

[blinky]

Ah, I see what you mean. I will fix that tommorow. Thanks alot for the help.

[nikia]

Looks good so far, other than the eye problem, which was already pointed out.

[Ian Mack]

The right eye (the viewers) is showing too much of the pupil...the upper lid should cover a little more of it.

[blinky]

http://www.geocities.com/ewilson87/aragorn2.txt

I tried to fix both problems that were pointed out, other than that I havn't really done anything.

[blinky]

ok, I wanted to post the times.

Drawing: 30 mins(estimate it was during some tv show)
first coloroing pic: 71 mins
second color pic: about 5 mins
third: about 60 mins

http://www.geocities.com/ewilson87/aragorn3.txt

[blinky]

http://www.geocities.com/ewilson87/aragorn5.txt

[Phuzion]

Hhhmmm... his right eye (our left) is still looking a little too far in. He's still looking a bit cross eyed. Also, is this Viggo? Or is it your perseption of Aragorn? Just curious. I believe Aragorn has blue eyes either way, as do most of the characters in the story... for whatever reason. Anywho, it's coming along nicely, keep pluggin' away! Peace

[blinky]

It is supposed to be Viggo, and I know that the eye seams weird but i just can't seem to get it in the right spot.

Oh and anyone got any ideas for a background?