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[3dxiaman]

My first fully rendered concept art using photoshop.
character is a remake of famous philippine comic heroine.... (no copyright infrigment intended)

[Viridis]

Nice work. I like the armor style, even if I continue to wonder why any heroine in their right minds would try to fight in something like that. It looks cool, although I feel like those little leather straps would really cut into her skin and maybe cause some unfortunate damage. :/

I would work on skin shading a bit more, as her skin looks much flatter compared to the armor, and maybe give the armor sharper highlights as well. Metal is shiny, so it has very distinct highlights, but you've used a softer brush and so in some cases the metal looks more like fabric (like on her gauntlets).

Still, it's pretty good work, and it gets the concept across well.

[Dahami]

In general I would say the skin and the edges need work. Maybe some dark lines to add definition to the edges or at least some shadows or something. The eye sees shapes in terms of lines, and I'm not saying to go cartoon-style, but there should be more contrast at some of the edges.

The armor design is nice (if not very practical) and I like the face and use of color (except the skin is perhaps too white in spots and needs some richer tones). Good work, overall.