woman (partial nudity)

[ChaosJT]

This is a drawing that I spent alot of time on. I tried to create a "soft" look with this piece. Honest non flaming c&c would be well appreciated. Thank you. ^_^

http://www.joinedartists.com/uploads/womanpartnud.jpg

[die_with_honor]

needs some work on the left shoulder boobs are decent nice work

[MooingCow]

Needs clavicles/sternum, the left boob saggs too much with the perspective you're working with, her face and hair don't match the overall value change in her body/whole composition, and again with the perspective, the left bicept is too long. Really focus on the overall image before going into messing with value and detail. Looks like you jumped in too fast. I'd just keep on doing sketches before spending a lot fo time on another piece like this.
Good start but you need a lot more practice with anatomy/skeletal studies, lighting, and perspective...
Hope this helps

[ChaosJT]

Thanks for the replies. I appreciate the tips and comments. I'm trying to do studies on all of the things you mentioned mr cow, but sometimes you get that "i need to draw something and finish it" ^_^ I also wanted to see how far I have gotten since these studies and from what you have said on what i need to work on I have improved, and from what you suggested, now i know what i need to continue to improve on. thanks ^_^

[MooingCow]

NP, glad I could help.
Keep posting and I'll keep critiquing.