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DRESDEN
December 7th, 2003, 10:25 PM
Happy Holidays Everyone!!

Here's a nice Christmas mutant for ya. Just some concept art i did when i was bored.

Pen & Ink & Marker

C & C always welcome

http://www.artwanted.com/images/large/7518_55303.jpg

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DRESDEN
December 11th, 2003, 03:46 PM
Come on, not even one reply? Is it that shit?

Dominie_Dirtch
December 11th, 2003, 03:59 PM
Lame when no one replies. I think it's cool, nice and grody looking idea, and good use of inks. One thing you might've done... Shown a little more contrast in color on the mutant himself. Like some of the area's that look like muscle tissue, darken those more, and on the face, a few details... whatever you think works best to just define shapes more, and show them in 3D space better... Anyways, great job.

gasmask
December 11th, 2003, 04:43 PM
i dont understand why people get mad when no one replies...it can mean either A. its just not interesting or B. people will reply and havent got to it yet so relax. First off i think its pretty cool but u need to practice ur line work, its pretty sloppy and alot of its hard to real, the markering aint bad but push contrast more and make sure u really define ur light source.

DRESDEN
December 11th, 2003, 04:47 PM
Dominie_Dirtch- thanks for the crits.

gasmask - i'm not mad about people not replying, i just liked this piece and wanted some feedback. Thanks for the C & C

jca
December 11th, 2003, 04:57 PM
wow really nice use of ink; i'm trying to get to the point where ur at but it would probably take a while :T

kidcrucial
December 12th, 2003, 09:05 AM
The only thing I would suggest would to vary the line wieght a bit. Other than that, and the other comments, I think it's a nice idea. One thing I have been trying to discipline myself in is (even though I hate it) re-drawing the character at least twice more after I have finished what I would normally consider a finished piece. I find that I come up with new or varying ideas and am pretty pleased with that last third piece. Okay-I admit, I have only implemented this new policy once-but it worked out well for me. Sorry for the rambling.

DRESDEN
December 12th, 2003, 12:19 PM
jca- thanks for the kind words

kidcrucial- thanks for your input

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