"santa's little helper" (minor nudity)

[nathanmckenna]

hi guys, my first post here.
i sketched this, a few nights ago. planning on inking it soon.
i have been influenced by www.jabcomix.com for this drawing, just somthing about the style that makes my knees go all wibbly.
c & c appreciated. -thanks!


http://nathanmckenna.4t.com/images/helper.jpg

[soul8o8]

MINOR!???

they are huge!

[Sinix]

Heh, very stylish, the legs seem abit unpleasing, but the expression in great.

[MooingCow]

I'd shrink her feet down. They are HUGE for what you're looking for. Also, I'd really show the stretching of the fabric on her top. Add maybe a few stretch marks, and make the stretching on her nipples more emphasized.
I think I'd give her a little more volume in her oblique (love handle.) Just seems to come a add too far in.
Nice form and seems very fluid.
Hope this helped.

[Elwell]

Scolling down...

looks good...

looks good...

AAHHG! THOSE FEET!

What an unpleasant surprise. Fix them.

[Aven]

Haha. Very cool. I don't find the feet to be too odd as it suits the overall style.

Very sexy, AND it helped me decide want I want for Xmas :grin: