comic book

[Stefani Rennee]

Hi Guys! Please, tell me what you think about this page.

thank you very much

[OplanicP]

I really like it. the city and all is relly nice. Would like to see more :)

[Stefani Rennee]

Thank you! i will be posting more pages very soon

[stoph]

i really dig the sharp highlights and strong contrasts, adds to the dynamic of the figures. how long does one of these pages take for you, from sketches to completion? pretty polished for a comic, which is a good thing to see these days

[Stefani Rennee]

Hi Stoph! Thank you very much.
I spent 10 hours to complete this page. i did all on photoshop
(PS: sorry about my english)

[Dahami]

The eyes and faces of the two gals shouting don't look quite right to me, especially if you are going for the young groupie look. The lines on the face shouldn't be that obvious, particularly on the platinum blonde one in the back (and her neck could be a little thinner). The palm of the hand doesn't look quite right on the red-head. Some of the details could be left out or simplified and the picture might actually benefit from that. Great work on the men, the helicopter and the city (except the palm of the alpha male's hand, as the human palm has a shallow area in the middle--it's not a butt). :)

[Professor Wagstaff]

first of all, well done! this is a really good comic sample, very professionally presented :) I agree with most of what Dahami says, the bit that bugs me most is the main guys hand that's waving, the palm is too curvaceous (down to the highlights) and the way it joins the wrist is a bit too abrupt. Apart from that its pretty darn good!

[chris chUa]

looks great! hey, did you color Chrono mechanics for Art Thibert? you have the same name as the colorist. I was the other artist on that book.

[Stefani Rennee]

Hi Chris! thank you
yes, i did the colors for Chrono Mechanics :steph: