Hey some comic pages I have been working on.

[GoatboyBBMA]

Some of the dialogue needs work, but these are sorta test pages. I have the full story in mind and I just wanted to try and get them out of my noggin. So anyway, onto the comic book Codename Steve.

http://www.broadband-my-ass.com/fantasyart/codenamesteve/codenamesteve01.jpg
http://www.broadband-my-ass.com/fantasyart/codenamesteve/codenamesteve02.jpg
http://www.broadband-my-ass.com/fantasyart/codenamesteve/codenamesteve03.jpg
http://www.broadband-my-ass.com/fantasyart/codenamesteve/codenamesteve04.jpg
http://www.broadband-my-ass.com/fantasyart/codenamesteve/codenamesteve05.jpg
http://www.broadband-my-ass.com/fantasyart/codenamesteve/codenamesteve06.jpg

Goatboy
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[ProudestMonkey]

I really like it so far.. some of the drawing a little hard to make out perspective and what's kind of going on (see panels 3, 4 and 12 if you were going down from the top by each block of mini panels).

But I think it's pretty cool. I'd read it if there was more of it, i think the plot is kinda neat too.


Proudest

[soul8o8]

very nice!!

ooooiiiiiiaa! ..the only thing that disturbs me is 1) the font 2) the speech bubbles around it!!!


first let's say that i am a fan of this (http://www.bancomicsans.com/) web site also mixing large and small font size is ok for marking that someone is talking LOUDER i think, but not otherwise..

second, all the lineart is really sweet! i duno, i just feel that the lines around the speech bubbles are a bit thin and lifeless... in contrast... maybe just make something happend with those lines.. just an idea.. very cool anyway! :)

[rick_hershey]

I really like it, cool idea and everyone loves zombies (maybe not everyone) my only suggestion has to do with pace. . .
It seems to be flowing a little to fast storytelling wise, I'd slow it down a little for the whole zombie section and give us more sense of danger and urgency.

but that's just my two cents.

[bhuddistmonk]

IT seems that some of your scenes with the zombies are kinda boring because the camera angle just isnt very interesting. Maybe try angling up looking up at the zombies... you have a great talent, everying else is fine! good work!