First Post: Warlord

[Rafael Hernandez]

I did this a couple of months ago for a contest. I'm aware that it has some obvios problems; the neck is too long and the upper teeth are slightly off. What I would like to know is what you think works and doesn't work in terms of compostion, color choice and any other elements that I'm not even aware of. I would be very thankfull for any C&C that anyone has. Thanks in advance.

http://www.toonfreak.com/~rafael/Images/WarLord-copy.jpg

[AfroLaxMan]

the green "burns" on my monitor, which gives it a uncomfortable play between the colors. Tone down everthing a bit, and take downt the saturation either in the background, or in the foreground. Cool character, just to vibrant.