gunner

[deviousg]

I like this in black and white - might color it though thoughts, crits??

http://www.machinelanguage.net/IMAGES/gunner.jpg

thx! :)

[CsakiP]

What the hell happened to that hat? It is flat so the head looks flat too.

[nikia]

Well let's see...........from the neck up everything is too flat. Her arms are too skinny and I think too long. What happened to the fingers on her right hand? neck too skinny for the body, knees are skinny. On the other hand, the dress looks nice, but I don't think a gunner would be wearing a dress like that. Her right boot looks like she's wearing the left boot. Wrong curve on the outside of the foot, put the curve on the inside instead of the outside. Hair isn't too bad. Sorry, I don't mean to sound harsh, but I'd rework it, change a few things. The idea is a good one.