ningaish ? lady

[gene]

hey heres another simple ink, its just a design for my reel, tell me what cha think...
http://www.vfs.com/~3d45gene/Female_character.jpg

[Scarn]

She's got Butt-cheek holes....

nice, I like it! Those metal things on the end of her dress-thing look like they could be hazardous to her legs... or enemies :) and what are those whispy/cloth-like things in the background?
All-in-all its an interesting design. Good job!

[wassermelone]

Gene: Nice work. Although... the form of the skirt is kind of confusing. The hair... I think needs some work compared to the rest of the linework. Also: Some of the line work seems sort of ...robot like. Is she a robot? Because if not I think some of the lines like the circle on her shoulder and butt cheek are not helping along with some of the other lines.

Scarn: Actually those spikes around her skirt are the true form of the ninja "star" as I have been led to believe...

-toasty =)

[donkeyslayer]

overall, i like it. but since i am a martial artist... i know how swords and whatnot should look. i like the new hakama design. there is plenty of space for the sword to fit through. the sword however, looks lacking. sure, it would look good to the untrained eye, but there are many parts missing :D. http://www.by-the-sword.com/acatalog/images/katanadiagram.JPG <- that is a diagram of a sword. i really dig those bow-shurikens ;)

[gene]

yeah she is ment to be a cyborg, the idea for the design for when it gets converted to 3D, is that those panal lines will lie subtley under her skin and defom accordingly.

and thanks for the feed back about the line work, its something that really always bugs me too, i can't figure out what type of pens, and how the pros do it soooo smoothly

[gene]

thanks for the pic, it would of been a good idea for me to referance this drawing, but i just sat down and did it when i had a few spare moments, i'm glad that i can pass it off as like i know what i'm doing.

whats a hakama, and a bow shiurkan? is the pose, indicative of a martial artist?

thank you,very helpfull stuff

[CsakiP]

I like this one but the only thing that bothers me is that she isn't holding the sword. Her thumb cannot fit there so it looks a bit strange.