Da Prince[keep hope alive]

[Aveh]

http://home.comcast.net/~aveaallen/Aces.jpg
http://home.comcast.net/~aveaallen/bad.jpg
http://home.comcast.net/~aveaallen/bringit.jpg
http://home.comcast.net/~aveaallen/igod.jpg
http://home.comcast.net/~aveaallen/handyman.jpg
http://home.comcast.net/~aveaallen/sheriff.jpg
http://home.comcast.net/~aveaallen/smoking.jpg


temporary problem was resovled

[Crash]

nice stuff man, i like your faces and hands (as i said before) and i also see that you and i share the same anatomy problems, something that helped me is that to break down the larger parts of the human and think of them as shapes,worked for me , but then again...im retarded.

this is what struck my eyes first.

http://www2.freepichosting.com/Images/118707/0.jpg


it looks like if you just make the muscles up as you go, and you need more life drawing ( as i do)




:chug:

btw: that "chug" thing was a joke, your to young to drink

[Immortal Jacko]

nice stuff aveh.. um.. i don't crit work. =) The um stretched and distored heads are cool looking though. Keep it up.

[Pencil Soldier]

Very orginal and creative.

[Pezz3D]

Lung bug? heh your style is amazingly alike his. pretty cool stuff none the less.

[sic1]

cool stuff Aveh :chug:

[die_with_honor]

ok i found your pictures freaky and un apealling to me concept your choise very nice for the style
sorry if this is affending or un understandable
to tell the truth i dont even know what i just said:confused:

[F3nix]

I like the cigarettes. :D

[LiL QoH]

watch your proportions and do some more life drawings :D

[soul8o8]

ey wicked man! you're playing with form like it was sand in your hands and i like it! i believe you have a very healthy way of approaching your drawings.. keep breaking the rules! :cool:

[die_with_honor]

I didn't want to edit so ill just make a diff. coment take some anotomy classes some of these look unreal but all in all there all right.
there

[Main Loop]

not bad.. you seem to sorta know what you're doing, but i dont quite get the "liquid-heads" with non-existent skulls, i guess? the muscles under the pecs are way off, either too much interlocking or too little.. look at the 3rd one.. there's about 20 on each side! there sould be a max 4 or 5 that show.. If you're going to use anatomy, you gotta know it.. bottom line..

[yoshiman1/4]

its koo i guess

[donkeyslayer]

it looks like lung influenced stuff
:B probably not. it looks like both lung and aveh have inspiration from the same place. they look Tew influenced if you ask me :chug:
crits: on the first page (which is appearently the older page of the dump) has anatomical flaws on the faces on the sides. the second one down has the eyes too far foreward, as well as the ear. also (may be a style thing) it seems like you have too any muscles.
pz bro
:beer:

[Belligergerum]

nice. you have a very interesting style. i love it!

[Aveh]

all your posts are much appreciated, especially jens and crash, awesome crit brought some things to my attention that i previously looked over.
heh donk =}
small update, just throught i'd try and get soem feedback on


http://home.comcast.net/~aveaallen/machiavelli.jpg
http://home.comcast.net/~aveaallen/suck0rz.jpg
http://home.comcast.net/~aveaallen/totown.jpg

P.S. crash: age is a technicality

[EmilyROAR]

OMGWTF!1! YUO SCUK!!!1ONE

Just kidding. <3

Since you asked for it, ill TRY to give a critique, but im stupid so yeah. From what it looks like, you need to practice drawing mostly around the collar bone area because it seems to me like you dont add enough 'dip' to the...dip thats there where your collarbones meet and it causes the pectorals to seem up too high on alot of you drawings..but then again, I could be wrong :(

<3 Emily

[donkeyslayer]

......:confused:
where did ya go dude?:beer:

[Ant4d]

yeah, where did you go buddy? we want to see some progress.

[DR_SP0CK]

Nice stuff, but are you by any chance lying down when doing these, alot of them seem crooked. Like this: (

[Aveh]

just a small update to attempt to appease ant and donk. nothing really special or awe-inspiring. just some sketches i had fun doing in calculus class a while ago.
Dr Spock : nah, didnt draw laying down. just something i used to do cause i thought it looked a bit more interesting than straigh on ...some weird idea i had in my head

http://home.comcast.net/~aveaallen/evovle.jpg
http://home.comcast.net/~aveaallen/enlightenment.jpg
http://home.comcast.net/~aveaallen/thelight.jpg
just added a little WIP thing im workin on for school.

[joe3sk8erpk]

really nice sketches i like how you put random crazy stuff in them it makes fun to look at

[HugeHarHar]

Some nice stuff. You seem to make all of the characters skrunch(?wierd word?) thier heads into their necks. Or most of them have this lack of a neck at all. Just my little throw of the dice.

[Crash]

hey aveh kick ass update, really nice.

Even though i havent been following your art that much i can see a difference from this and your older stuff.

the crit i have is that it looks like if your doing the same thing over and over again, ive been there to.
something that I would look forward to is to see some studies and non-liquid- heads.

ps: something else that kicks ass is that i can see your art in a totally different place and still know thats you, youve got style mate.

[davi]

I think you are moving along very rapidly. Fantastic studies. It really shows that you've done alot of studies of faces because it's clearly your strongsuit.

I would suggest working with proportions of the over all figure. Also study the sides of the torso some, appears like your just making up the area as you go.

but honestly there isn't much to complain about here. Your at the level where people can't completely nit pick details but your close! so bewarned.

[Aveh]

joe - thanks alot man. I've tried to be trim and neat in my sketches, but I just dont have it in me. I love the way things look when they are scattered.

hugeharhar - yea i do, I've been trying to stop doing that , but the more I try and force myself to stop the more often i do it. so I guess im gunna let it dwindle down till I'm sick of it. thanks for the encouragement

crash - thanks man, I like to think im original. I'm no where near where I wanna be, but I'm workin on it.

davi - yeah I know just what you mean davi, but I just hope i get to that level a whole lot sooner and less later.

in english today i got really bored and I was gettin flashes of a wpe I seen of lung's a while back so just had to draw somethin to get going. so thanks for that lil push lung, whether you know it or not. I also tried to work on this picture idea for school magazine cover, but i dont like it anymore so i guess its back to the drawing board

http://home.comcast.net/~aveaallen/lunginspired.jpg
http://home.comcast.net/~aveaallen/thelight2.jpg
http://home.comcast.net/~aveaallen/wow.jpg

[Crash]

the torsos on the gals in the first pics are to short, almost like if the ribs have grown stuck into the pelvis, but they look kinda intentional imo.

The last page rocks man, the dude in the upper left corner looks really nice, i want to see more of that from you.

great stuff! :chug: