Fantasy based narrative...

[sam mooney]

Here are the first few pgs of a fantasy story I completed/abandon recently.
As always, comments and criticism are encouraged.

http://www.dandiscover.com/mapstorypgs/metamorphasis/01.jpg
http://www.dandiscover.com/mapstorypgs/metamorphasis/02.jpg
http://www.dandiscover.com/mapstorypgs/metamorphasis/03.jpg
Thanks for checking it out.

To view the rest of the story just check out the updates section of my website: http://www.dandiscover.com/updates.html

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[daMichi]

oh man, that's really fantastic!!

great work!:cool:

[epiphany]

good stuff......but there are problems with proportion and perspective in some panels....and continuity(if that is the correct term)

[Forge]

good work but is theend (on your site) is really The end ??? what happen to childrens ? and i really dislike the color of the rainbow wings... but good work