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alkaline111
December 1st, 2003, 08:35 PM
hello everyone!! well i this is an landscape i just started..... just kind of a color study really. im movin it along and there is still lots!! to do.. but it would be cool to hear advice from other brains and eyes.... what may be the next thing to work/focus on? thanks!!

http://www.tyadam.com/pics/albums/userpics/gilfling3.jpg
trevor
December 2nd, 2003, 01:48 AM
y,know what?...
you dont really need any help on this, it looks amazing and its got a great gestural feeling. as far as more detail or adding other objects/ subject matter
i would trust your judgement on that

if it aint broke....


trevor
alkaline111
December 2nd, 2003, 02:07 AM
adding a bit more detail cleaning up shapes and still trying to get the colours to work. should haevthis done by tomorrow still have lots more elements to add and structural work on the gate/ well huge wall in the background..


http://www.tyadam.com/pics/albums/userpics/gilfling2%7E0.jpg
talmir
December 2nd, 2003, 02:45 PM
erm.. hmm.. you know.. hmm.. what to say.. hmm

Well, IŽll just settle for 'WOW!' :D Keep it up man, a little more work and it will be a masterpiece imo
Landmate
December 2nd, 2003, 04:38 PM
I like it, dont destroy your large shapes

does it need a foreground?
nikia
December 2nd, 2003, 06:17 PM
Looks good, maybe bring out the root in the foreground.
Ian Mack
December 2nd, 2003, 10:02 PM
I'm not digging the lime green in the cloud.

A foreground is important...maybe bring out the root, or if you have alot of time to put into this piece, a stream, or path?

I'd also say to develop the underside of your tree more but Landmate said not to destroy your large shapes so I'm not sure if that would conflict.
alkaline111
December 3rd, 2003, 08:05 PM
heres step 4.... gots one more to do gonna clean up the shapes work on the silloutte of the creepy creature in the smoke and _________ what ever you fellas think would improve the pic.... the last posts you guys had helped me out, thanks

http://www.tyadam.com/pics/albums/userpics/gilfling3%7E0.jpg
nikia
December 4th, 2003, 01:04 AM
Looking good. Like what you did to the root, I also like the green fog. Just a nitpick, most of the trees in the background are angled in the same direction as the slope. Trees will grow straight up even if they are on a slope. I see a lot of artists do this. Just something to keep in mind for next time.