Yellow Man: "I have nothing to do with those explosions down there."

[Paulo]

From The Adventures Of The Yellow Man!

Not quite finished, but I gotta move on. Painter!

http://web.newsguy.com/carpen/images/yellowman.jpg

C&C welcome ;)

Cheers,

Paulo

[Bretton]

i think maybe the legs are too short and the arms seem a bit long... but dont take my word for it i usually exaggerate the hell out of my proportions... i really like his face and it's expression though it looks good

[danielh68]

I like it. I can't really crit your work, because it's very stylized...which is why I like it. I'm into the cool painterly brushstrokes.

[Paulo]

On a second look...

I like this being stylized too, it was very deliberate, but the inconsistency of the proportions are really too distracting here. I meant this guy's proportions to be alongated (check his face and arms), so in this case his legs should've been longer. It's quite conspicuous now that I look at this after being away for a time.

Part of the problem, I know, is that I started this without even a quick sketch (I know, mi fault) :bash:

You'll find in the WIP section something I'm doing from a quick sketch. I wish now it hadn't been so quick ;)

Thanks for the input :nana I may go back to this painting one day. It's too narrow, to begin with.

Cheers,

Paulo