Hey dude !!

[A.pipe]

"Hey dude, long time no see, how are ya?'

this is my latest Painter work
Let me know what you think. thanks


http://www.chinavfx.com/bbs/attachments/200311/29190550-fly1s.jpg

[A.pipe]

hey guys,can someone tell me which one u think is better.

http://www.chinavfx.com/bbs/attachments/200311/29185924-fly2s.jpg

[OLSEN]

Hi, it looks good. i just think you need to use some of that light coming from the point of view to describe the robotic shapes better, as it is now the robot looks very flat.

I also think that the picture needs something that makes the viewer focus on the robot, and especially the eye area. A faint glow is a bit overused but works fine, like this smilie: :alien3:

Overall its good though, hope to see more from you.

[A.pipe]

thanks Dude


here is an other illustration i just made.
"the no.27 half-bot"

hope u like it:)
C&cC are welcome.

http://www.chinavfx.com/bbs/attachments/200312/01201937-bothead2s.jpg

[A.pipe]

OLSEN:
thanks for your reply and suggestions.
this illustration is about what can u see in a mirror

sometimes when you look at the mirror.you may get some really bad and strange feeling.
i mean if you spend like 1 or 2 hours look at the mirror,you should feel that you are not like a "human" at all. you are transformed to something, something from your subconscious......
i tried once,i saw a red, terrible,kinda insect like robot in the mirror.i was really scaared and i will never try it angin .
so, i did this illustration for note down the feeling.
if you are interested,you can try.
i'm sure you will not happy with what you are really like. but you will remember the feeling in your whole life.

:)

[K-10]

Kewl Gotta try that sometime, I got acne you see :D

Edit: Great work btw, where did you get your ispiration for the cyborgs (pardon my grammar)

[nil]

re: the first one
i think the shadow that is falling on the wall is in the wrong place for it to be formed by the window reflected in the mirror.try lightening up the face a bit and maybe darken the piece overall. this will make the face more of a focal point.
i love the little fly. i think its the details like that that really make illustrations.