Little girl concept (updated)

[mime]

It started from a concept sketch i decided to color with painter.
She's a 9 years old little girl with a magical doll.

http://erhnam.free.fr/pfille%20couleur.jpg

comments and crits are welcome :)

[Burn Things.]

heehee i love that lil doll.

The nose seems to be a tad off center for this angle- (da nose seems to be made in painter only , so it shouldnt be too hard to fix if you choose to) of course thats only what my eyes tell me- :p

[linK]

i really love the style and the color of the piece.. good work..

[Fozzybar]

I like it...but if you work out her nose and mouth just a little bit more...it would love it. The nose and mouth look flat in comparison with the rest...but with the help of the magical bunnydoll it shouldn't be a big thing :D

[mime]

I decided to rework the lines, cause they were too messy.
I also tried to add colors to the lines, but im not sure its good or not ... your help would be very appreciated on this subject ...

i used selections on my black lines, and hue "color" variation on them in photoshop, but since the colors are on a layer in multiply i cannot have consistent color in the lines (if you see what i'm meaning) ... if anyone have a clue on how to have solid color lines with the method i used it would be great help too ...

here are the two versions

http://erhnam.free.fr/pfille2c1.jpg http://erhnam.free.fr/pfille2c2.jpg

here is also the lineworks if you want to see it

black and white (http://erhnam.free.fr/pfille2cl1.jpg)
color (http://erhnam.free.fr/pfille2cl2.jpg)

[Kappei]

hey nice one mime

i love ts manga-style very beautiful pic.
only the hair looks strange, but i thing that
is your style, or?...

ok c
Kappei :D