final work moved from critique section

[nzrkiwi]

Working on a graphic novel idea had this in the critique section during the later stage and got some good feedback there to the final stage!

[Iridyse]

Nice poses/expressions on the monkeys. The mohawked T-rex is nice too.
One thing that really stands out that your shadows are super dark. In an environment that is so warm as this, there should be a lot more red/orange seeping into the shadows. The little guy jumping is not very convincing either.I think you can work on this piece a little more, it could turn out really nice :)

[nzrkiwi]

Hey Iridyse,

Thanks mate for your advise i took note of that it was very good advice by first softening the dark shadows with the orange and red and gave movement to the toddler to give that uplift propolsion i painted in motion blur effect to all the elements that where moving! Although this is suppose to be final presentation page i greatly appoligize for that:)

Cheers

[nzrkiwi]

Wow had to fix some compositional headaches i took the clouds out from the center of the composition as this was splitting the image composition. I also had to elongate and enlarge the legs to make them look more beleivable!
I can see that the horizonatl posture of the dinosaur has made the toddler look stangnated so i could have done the dinosaur posture in a more dynamic way rather than symmetrical to the toddles posture! But next time i have to consider my compositional design stage with more consideration!