Girls on t-shirt

[Simgio]

Hello! long time without posting here...
this is an illustration I did for my t-shirts...

[Murgen]

looks great, lov it!

[Simgio]

Thanks murgen!
This one is a design I discarded, but
still I find something interesting in it

[xxEnder]

i like the style youre going for, and the concept for the tshirts is really cool.

Some crits: the proportions on the red girl and your second post seem off and really bug my eye, Id say take another run through them and maybe fix some of it, its not too far off, just little things like arm length and whatnot. Also itd be cool if you made the drips coming down them more stylized, its a nice concept so I'd want to push it, its pretty subjective but thats my input on that.