View Full Version : New Years Revisited - I need advice!!
Kress
November 27th, 2003, 01:29 AM
Whatsup - I'm still working on the NY flyer for this year and have finally gotten it going. I've narrowed the girls face to three options and I can't decide.
I'm trying to go for sexiness and a sense of overwhelming fun. The flyer should make you want to go to this party and be reckless.
Which one says that the most? ANd any other advice would be appreciated. BTW she will have an urban/tropical bground behind her...
http://www.dropship1.com/art/NYhead1.jpg
http://www.dropship1.com/art/NYhead2.jpg
http://www.dropship1.com/art/NYhead3.jpg
Help!!!
Forge
November 27th, 2003, 02:31 AM
n. 1 to me...
CsakiP
November 27th, 2003, 02:55 AM
I like nr 2 the best so it's not a big help yet. :)
Landmate
November 27th, 2003, 04:02 AM
agh hard choice
im gonna have to go with #3
gl
Kress
November 27th, 2003, 04:09 AM
arg! I like number 2 personally. Thanks all for replying. Hehe all different votes except for 2...
We'll see how it pans out. Thx again...
talmir
November 27th, 2003, 04:24 AM
3
Fozzybar
November 27th, 2003, 10:38 AM
1
p1ke
November 27th, 2003, 12:03 PM
!!!1
I.was.ink
November 27th, 2003, 12:11 PM
1
K-10
November 27th, 2003, 03:10 PM
Three
Trois
Drei
Tre
Tres
..... Þrír :D
soul8o8
November 27th, 2003, 03:51 PM
..i'd say it depends on what you're going to use this for?
..oh, now i read you post too ;) nevermind..
i'd go to the club who had girl number 3 on it.. looks more sexy to me.. but then girl no 1 looks more overwhelmingly happy..
..but girl number 1 could be even more sexier i think - if you opened up her mouth a little more + made the mouth smile a little more + closed her eyes a little more.. yep.. then i'd go with no 1..
really nice drawings btw!
Mooboo
November 27th, 2003, 07:32 PM
Number OnE!!!
the others are too evil looking!
Elwell
November 27th, 2003, 08:04 PM
The first comes closest to the extactic feel I think your going for. The positioning of the head goes with the action of the figure, while the other two go against it and break the flow. The face could use some work, though, maybe opening her eyes more and fixing her mouth. (EDIT: Or closing the eyes and opening the mouth like soul8o8 said.)
Kress
November 28th, 2003, 03:59 AM
Wow thanks for all the votes guys. The Eatpooers like #1 too - and I agree it's got that sensual thing goin on. If I were to do number one, it would still need something more... happy? Like make her smile bigger? It needs to be sexy, but ecstatic too... hmmmmm.
Thanks again this is actually really helping. More votes please!!!
OLSEN
November 28th, 2003, 04:23 AM
My vote: 1
But what i actually think is:
A combination of 1 and 3. Keep the face of 1 but make it slighly naughtier like 3, and lower it slighly so you get better contact with the viewer, like nr 2, but 3 is to much.
Kress
November 28th, 2003, 10:14 PM
Thanks again everyone - but guess what, it was all for nothing lol. Turns out the client really liked the original sketch I turned in, just to give him a feeling of what was going to happen. So, I spent a day and a half drawing face options that he didn't even want. So it goes, I guess...
I'll post the flyer as it goes along - and thx again all, great feedback.
Golanhall
November 29th, 2003, 01:56 PM
1 or 2, the 3th one looks likes the face of one of the commercials by chiqita bananas :)
pvrhye
December 3rd, 2003, 11:47 PM
Definitely the top one. Mostly compositional reasons.
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