demon knight

[gallon]

I wanted to try out PS 7 and I drew this. I been experimenting with the new brushes (and they are everything u couldn't do in PS 5.5, but always wanted :D ) and this is the result. Right now I'm swapping between different styles and I hope I can show u some more soon (just need to get some pics scanned).
Well, this is one style of mine... the newest and therefore the one I'm most insecure about.
Tell me how to improve and what's good about it. I'm sorry about the link, but where my website is they don't allow imagehosting. Enjoy :evilbat:

http://hem.passagen.se/gallon/dknight.htm

[mc_delroy]

well lets see here....


well start with the helm.... it looks slighty unpreportioned to the angle in which the demon knight is supposed to be standing. it just looks like its to small... as if the guy put it on, and there is no way in hell he is getting it off... make it bigger. also try shifting the line seperating the two sides of the mouth over a tad bit to the right to make it look more preportioned to the rest of the body

i like your shading

the part of his pelvis by his left leg (our right) is slightly to high, you also may want to consider moving that entire leg over a skooch

his right hand (our left) isnt dynamic enough, it looks fake
Try making the space between the joints of the first finger and the thumb larger ( by the hand you know )

and last but not least, his right foot... have it turned more towards the veiwer for a more beleivable stance

hope any of this helped

[gallon]

great crit! Absolutely one of the best I've had (and I been a lot on other forums so :))
Thanks for taking the time!

Well,that is some things to consider. I agree with the head thing (it is very small, hope he'll never take off that armour, he probably looks silly :))

I will think the crits though and then I'll probably redraw the pic.