No idea if this will hold interest to anyone...

[joi]

But I do an online comic inspired by sam's explodingdog.
You can see it @ www.dumbJoi.com

Enjoi.

[Halis_Aetrous]

Interesting style.

The humor is very dry. I like it.

[Samurai]

I think it's fairly poor. I can't really offer any criticism on how to improve it except to try something else artistically. Exploding dog was always experimental with angles and compositions, wheras this is just stick figures with ambiguous sayings.

Try expanding it and, if you insist on drawing stick figures, try new things with composition and color. Since your figures are trying to express more with less, make use of their minimalistic nature and give them more dynamic postures and facial expressions. They tend to just stand there smiling when they could be telling your story for you.

[joi]

Originally posted by Halis_Aetrous
Interesting style.

The humor is very dry. I like it.

Heh, Sam, still don't like them. Which is fine. I'll continue to do them as the 30,000+ people that've been to the site since June seem to enjoy them... if this wasn't the case. I would stop. There's even t-shirts, mugs, mousepads, posters, underwear/boxers/thongs of dJ out there. I also wasn't looking for critique - but I'll take your advice and try different angles.

[Crash]

I also wasn't looking for critique - but I'll take your advice and try different angles.


This should be in oooh and aaaah's then.

[joi]

Originally posted by joi


Heh, Sam, still don't like them. Which is fine. I'll continue to do them as the 30,000+ people that've been to the site since June seem to enjoy them... if this wasn't the case. I would stop. There's even t-shirts, mugs, mousepads, posters, underwear/boxers/thongs of dJ out there. I also wasn't looking for critique - but I'll take your advice and try different angles.

Crap.

[Mr. Teatime]

i like explodingdog better.

[skvv]

since the idea seems to be a direct rip, i knew i had seen this before and then i remembered explodingdog.

[joi]

Originally posted by evisr8r
since the idea seems to be a direct rip, i knew i had seen this before and then i remembered explodingdog.

Direct rip? Ack.

[ion one]

i like them, i read all of them, its to the point kinda like those farside things...i love the hotbox one.....mmmmm dank.

[joi]

Originally posted by ion one
i like them, i read all of them, its to the point kinda like those farside things...i love the hotbox one.....mmmmm dank.

Glad you enjoyed them.