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IRON-MAN-429
December 3rd, 2008, 12:07 PM
Went and redid an old painting of mine.
FourTonMantis
December 3rd, 2008, 02:01 PM
The rendering is pretty good. Just a few things...
The cape looks extremely stiff.
The pose of the arm holding the shield seems kind of unnatural.
There appears to be no middleground. Maybe add some soldiers closer to him; it seems like he's way far away from the battle.
Overall, it's not too bad.
Noah Bradley
December 3rd, 2008, 03:03 PM
Also, having the sword perfectly horizontal is probably hurting any sense of a dynamic pose. I like the way you painted the helmet.
couch-potato
December 4th, 2008, 07:02 PM
Also, having the sword perfectly horizontal is probably hurting any sense of a dynamic pose. I like the way you painted the helmet.
This. The horizontal positioning makes it look like you took a shortcut.
The rest is ace, mate!!!
qlanuknow
December 4th, 2008, 09:35 PM
really like the helmet rendering. nut needs more detail .
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