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disp
November 28th, 2008, 04:13 AM
got a new scanner so i thought it put some of my sketches online

im just an amateur trying to improve my art

criticisms, insults, and personal attacks are all welcome

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c66/disp/yourgay.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c66/disp/Robot3.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c66/disp/Robot1.jpg

dont ask me what the last three images are supposed to be of. i have no idea

FightingSeraph
November 28th, 2008, 12:52 PM
Regarding the first pic: The bottom of the woman's toga is translucent in the wrong way (e.g. you can see the marble bench) and should be opaque. Plus, the skin gradients make the skin look rather plastic-ish. Other than that, there isn't much else to say.

disp
December 1st, 2008, 03:53 AM
thanks seraph, totally missed the translucent toga

here is a warhammer 40k sister of battle

Mr.Juicy
December 1st, 2008, 04:41 AM
Need more works to determine at which parts you need to work more. Keep showing - we'll keep insulting and attacking :D

disp
December 9th, 2008, 08:06 PM
another sister of battle