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nardfrog
November 23rd, 2003, 05:22 PM
Hi to save space around here all post all my new work on this page. Enjoi! Please feels free to leave c&c.

http://www.freewebs.com/berzerkrobot/foebusta.txt

Killer Napkins
November 23rd, 2003, 05:32 PM
wow man thats fuckin swet.. its cool to finally see u post some new stuff.. u did a GREAT job on this i love it!

Sinix
November 23rd, 2003, 05:40 PM
Very cool. :chug:

ZeroWave
November 23rd, 2003, 05:42 PM
Cool bot..only one crit..the head looks a tiny bit skewed..in anycase still looks good

ChadTHX1138
November 23rd, 2003, 06:07 PM
Awesome!

no long drawn out critique.....except I would add something to the area where his neck is, it is too plain and empty looking you managed to make it work on the arm to the right rather than throwing a color in, give it a shot.

nardfrog
November 23rd, 2003, 06:29 PM
chad, LMAO, after I posted this, i realized I complete forgot to draw anything inside the neck! Ill diffinately fix that. :) Im not sure what you mean about the arm though, please explain in more detail.

thanks everyone

Mysen
November 23rd, 2003, 06:42 PM
i dig the coloring. onthing i might suggest.. and its just a suggestion.. is to add some dings and paint scrapes etc.. just to make it look not so perfect.

looks great though

Prometheus|ANJ
November 23rd, 2003, 06:53 PM
Cool shapes. I like the white colors too. The geometry appears a bit too deformed at places.

al-x
November 23rd, 2003, 07:29 PM
Nice design, love the use of the red outline.

But as Prometheus said the geometry seams a bit deformed and some things (like for example his right arm) doesn't feel right in the perspective. And (know this maybe is nagging) you elipses are a bit off. ;)

But otherwise, you have something cool going on here...

defcombeta
November 23rd, 2003, 07:43 PM
cool stuff prime is nice , i love the way you used the old head type , and not that new block type one.

the mech is bulky and has that stomp look that i like so much

great stuff and im glad you got good hosting

john mac

gasmask
November 23rd, 2003, 08:37 PM
yesssssss its been so long, ur stuff rocks dude, and way to represent WA. keep this shit comin dude

Lux
November 23rd, 2003, 08:53 PM
I think rework the head some more, its not worthy of the rest of the body imo. It kinda looks like a human head with a heart shaped visor stuck into it, plus it doesnt have much personality. The rest is pretty dam nice

evillair
November 23rd, 2003, 09:30 PM
That's a cool pic, the shading is great.

I second the motion for a new\reworked head. Would add alot with one that is bigger. (my 2cents)