Comic pages&Thunderdome

[Loga4]

Hi,boys and girls,here are 2 pages
of my comic project,its name is ``REKVIUM``
I stoped work on this because my writer cant
find good ending,and always change something:)
Also I choose bad paper,which didnt accept color very well,
so it looks somehow blury(dont know if I choose good
word)I paint it with guashe.


http://www.imagemagician.com/images/loga4/CART01.jpg

http://www.imagemagician.com/images/loga4/CART02.jpg

Heh,and there is almost finished Thunderdome piece,I
Blench from background.
C&C always welcome.



http://www.imagemagician.com/images/loga4/HonzilaNEWa1.jpg

[mc_delroy]

dude that comic is some dope shizzle

it reminds me of the first war scene on gladiator

mixed with some hoth

keep it up mr. loga4

[Loga4]

mc_delroy,thanks man!
I would like to proceed with this comic
because it is good idea,but as I say,
it`s mising end,and I`m currently working
on advertising firm,which take me most of my
time.I`m also preparing new comics,when I have
something to share,I will post here.
As for ``Gladiator``and``Hot``,many people
get same impression,probably I did it Subconscious(ly).
:D
Good observation.

[Jason Manley]

hmmm...

there are a few things that would strengthen the piece....which is a fun piece by the way....one..add a background a bit...look at vignettes by richard schmid and other artists to see how to throw in some simple background shapes which add interest to the image. the second would be to work on your overall lighting...how does light fall on the entire form of the creature and car?? what direction is the light source.


i love the big whale eye or whatever...that made me smile.

ya got the ideas....now lets work on the presentation for future stuff. k?


j

[Loga4]

Hey,Jason thanks for tips!
No doubt,I will try to do things that you say,
I hope that I can nail some more time.
I will post upgrades soon.
Thanks again!

[Loga4]

Yes,of course,lets work on the presentation for future stuff!