dead pool sketch

[Grendel]

This is a non objective deadpool sketch I came up with added some colors quickly for fun. Quality isn't that great I know.

http://igrendel.com/images/sequentials/dp2.jpg

[GirafeEnFeu]

I don't know what to say... But I just love everything you do! :inlove:

[Form]

nice! wats deadpool?

First Frame: Readability is fine, the pose may be a tiny bit on the cheesy side, but only a bit.

Second Frame: Can you clarify the roof edge? It wasnt immediately apparent to me that he was on the edge of the building. try deepening whats below him and throwing some moonlight acroos the roof, you need a high contrast edge.

Third Frame: Nice:D

Final Frame: I tried but i just couldnt read it. Try clarify that one.

Your one of the great contributors on CA keep it up.

[GirafeEnFeu]

Duuuuuh.... Deadpool's a comic book! :D

[Form]

im a comic noob

[GirafeEnFeu]

...excuses excuses...