Thunderdome C & C please??!?!

[Patch]

I am not sure if this is quite worthy of the T-Dome, so I thought that I would post it here for as much C & C as I could get (and a general concencis on whether it's good enough for the competition!).

http://patch24.dingojunction.com/wip/tdome.jpg

ALL commentaries greatly appreciated.

BTW- of course this would be colored, so any color recommendations also appreciated...

[AfroLaxMan]

interesting...

It looks as if the torso was slapped onto the treads, then tied to a fan(??). The parts aren't really congruent to each other.

Try adding something that will make the torso look like it was attached with a purpose; wires, gears, a slinky, something.

The mini gun should have something feeding the bullets from. as it is now, looks more like a club than a gun.

The idea is interesting, but it could use a little more development. think about how you would build it, put some parts that would help all the pieces make more sense when they are together in this fashion.

[Fozzybar]

Patch, currently it looks very cute...i wanna hug it :p

Make it more evil...play with different sizes of the single parts.

I will say it in smilies...

Currently it looks :)

Make it :evilbat:

[celticdog]

It looks like you threw all the stuff you think is cool onto one drawing. You could make a half a dozen characters out of the parts of this guy ;) Functionality plays a big part in the aesthetics of concept art. Just my 2 cents, nuthin personal.