FREEDOM FORMULA 3 is OUT! pencils inside -

[Mr. Visions]

Hey guys, it's been a really (too long of) a time since I posted. Lots of things have evolved in the past year for myself. I had been working a design job make ends meat, but finally decided to take the plunge and if there was a time to make this art dream happen, it's now. So as things continue to develop, I'll be posting more regularly.
I got my first comic job on the title FREEDOM FORMULA, jumping in on issue 3. It hit the stands a couple days ago, here are some pencils from that issue. It's my first published comic, so crits and feedback are welcomed with wide open arms. Jumping into this is teaching me a lot, and hearing from you goes I'm sure be increase the curve. Thanks for looking :yayca: -

EDIT: Here's a link to a trailer and quick overview of what the title is about -
http://www.mania.com/videos/radicalp...ideo_2418.html

The following pages are just samples from the comic (1,3,6, & 22), not sequential to each other:

- Visions

[SEVANS]

I have no idea what the second panel on the first page is meant to be, some kind of ship or something. It's very unclear.

The rest of the pages read easily.

[Mr. Visions]

SEVANS - Thanks for commenting. Yeah, it was intended to be a flipped over ship, but it could have been clearer, thanks for pointing that out.

[JessiBean]

CHRIS! It is awesome to see you posting, and I have to say I really am enjoying how your style has evolved lately. Congrats on the job!

Is there more to see?

[Lone Wolf]

Looks good! I agree with SEVANS, that was a bit unclear. The pacing is clear and easy to follow. Can we see the inks and colors?

[Mr. Visions]

Jessica -Thanks!!! yeah, I just moved back to Richmond and pursuing work on my own. I'm still honing in on "my" style, I know I'm definitely pulling from all over the place, but this first issue definitely showed me what I do right now under pressure of the deadline. These are the only ones I'm posting from issue three, but I'm hoping to get the green light to post pencils from issue four soon, which I think will be overall better! Thanks for commenting chica -

Lone Wolf - Yeah, I wish I could have left these in the incubator a little longer, but yeah, I definitely see that as being confusing. I'm still pushing to get my quality and speed at the same point, so I believe the pencils will get better as I keep going. As for the inks and colors, I'll talk to the inker and colorist to see if I can post them, or find a link.

[midknight523]

really great pages

[Giorge]

Like the action that you build into your strips :)

[MoonVisionStudio]

My hat's off to you for making the jump! You have the skills! Best of Luck, I like your pencils.

[Kan Muftić]

great stuff, dude!

[Ignatz]

Great stuff man....BTW, how do you like working with Barry, Jeremy and Andrew?
They're pretty cool guys in my book.

[black_fish]

Excellent job on this. Like the style and the book.
Best of luck!
Radical put out some cool looking books.

[nicolas]

Cool!

[Mr. Visions]

midknight523, flamable, Chupacabre, MoonVisionsStudio - Thanks guys!

Ignatz - Thanks alot dude, yeah working with all the guys at Radical is a blast! I mainly work with Dave (coolest AD ever), Edmund (the writer and one who found my work, truly thankful), and Jeremy (extremely helpful), and for issue 4 and 5, I'm working with Garry Leech who's doing the inks, so "amazing" is the word.
black_fish - Thanks alot man!
Nicolas - Thanks! I saw your cover for issue four, top notch! I'm excited to have my work displayed with yours, cheers -

Thanks everybody for taking a look. I should be posting pencils for issue four very soon -

[airman]

wow! impressive!

[archipelago]

great stuff man.

beautiful stuff for it being your first comic!