starting a sequential page (the omen666)

[Amerkokh]

Hi.i made this for site u`ll c soon.udgang99 its a comic jam,i started the story and someone will finish it.i tihnk ill work with TIM KANE on the inks here coz u know.he`s a pro.i would like to show the steps of my work
First
i do sketches of the character that i want to draw.and in this its THE OMEN
http://www.jahannam.org/lesson/b4.jpg
well i didnt like the character at first so i worked alot of sketches untill i get to this
http://www.jahannam.org/lesson/s1.jpg
and by putting morel ines to it i liked it..and the same pose i imagined it would rock for the first pannel
http://www.jahannam.org/lesson/step3.jpg
here you see how it changes.more brutal...heheheh
now for the page..before i start a page i do a sketchy page like sotryboard then i start with the real one
heres the start of the real one
http://www.jahannam.org/lesson/omen1.jpg
here is the first step i do for the page after studying the pannels real hard to see what suites the page most.
AND i take care for the pencils to be clean by putting a paper above the original page so my hand wont blur stuff around.
http://www.jahannam.org/lesson/how.jpg
now.i put more details to the page by using a darker penil
http://www.jahannam.org/lesson/omen2.jpg
after that i scan it and by photoshop i do the contrast and brightness..play with the levels then i clean the sketchy lines of pencils so i wont give the inker hard time..
http://www.jahannam.org/lesson/omen3.jpg
anyways hope you like this.im working on the second page..ill show it soon
kokh
(sorry for the bad english ppl)

[nil]

thanks for posting this, its always interesting to see another artists process. i like the design of the zombie guys. zombies are awesome.

overall the page looks a little confusing to me, it is quite busy and a little hard to read the images clearly. having said that, after it is inked and coloured it will probably be clearer.

anyway, i look forward to seeing the second page.