Need help for Flash animation...

[RylandIllu]

I am working on a film with a firend called "Animal Eater" It has an interesting plot about an Animal Eater that lives up in Maine, and is killing livestock up there. The hero of the story goes to check on his uncle tha owns a cattle rach up there, and ends up killing the beast. It will follow the J. Campbell. It will take us about ayear working on and off of it, but we really want to make it good. We want to have it out by next Oct. Just thinking what you thought about the charactor and such. Any suggestions for the story line? I really want it to be good.


Here is a pic of the main charactor...

http://img.villagephotos.com/p/2003-10/451210/Newguy.gif


REMINDER- this is a cartoon, I posted this in another forum, and got a buch of gref because it didn't look real. Come on!- Comments are wanted, thank you!

Here are some pics of the monster himself, really just an idea I had for him. and another pic with the main guy on it.

http://img.villagephotos.com/p/2003-11/470723/MaingoodoneOutlinessmaller.jpg

http://img.villagephotos.com/p/2003-11/470723/InsidePagejsmaller.jpg

[Pencil Soldier]

I don't get the concept of the story.

[Fozzybar]

I got the story, but if you want to get good crits you should post something like a stroyboard...i can't crit anything yet, there is too less information...

Btw what sort of forum is the one you posted...if it's a cartoon you can't crit the lack of realism...