FFX Bahamut...ish

[Legato]

before the linch crys ring out, this is heavily based on bahamut from the final fantasy series. but i didn't use any reference, and it is fairly more ornate. C&C Welcome

http://incolor.inetnebr.com/legato/Art%20Scans/Bahamut.jpg

[evillair]

That's awesome.

[chadrm17]

I like the small details... looks great!

[Pencil Soldier]

I dunno about the hand...

[DanSTC]

Looks okay. The hand is bothering me, yeah. It seems out of proportion and somewhat poorly placed. The cropping of the image seems pretty awkward too.

[Legato]

i actually haven't cropped it yet... and wich hand is off?

[Blue2]

the whole thing looks cool except the left hand just doesnt seem like its in a comfortable position.. it doesnt flow too well. Not sure what to do to change it that doesnt require the entire arm to be redrawn but, well thats just my observation.

[Legato]

his left or my left?

[Blue2]

his left, its almost as if the hand is too small.

edit: i think i figured it out. the hand seems to low to represent the emotion the rest of the picture portrays, maybe if you raise the hand up while keeping the elbow in the same position and curle the pinky finger and rin finger in, that way there is more dynamics to the hand, it will almost seem like he is reaching out to something or calling soemthing in at the same time, at the moment i cant figure out what that hand is doing... the rest of it looks sweet though, damn sweet. :)

[DanSTC]

Yeah, doesn't matter if the hand IS supposed to be that small. It seems somewhat poorly composed and throws off the piece. (I also think it lacks a little dimensionality, myself.)

Also, I'm pretty sure that bahamut always had pretty big mitts to begin with.