Two pieces I just did

[Red_Rook]

Hey, all.
Here they are just did them today, i dont like certain parts though, guess its probably because my marker skills arent that great. Crits are always nice. =)
http://www2.freepichosting.com/Images/106061/0.jpg http://http://www2.freepichosting.com/Images/106061/1.jpg

Oh by the way there illustrations i was told to do after a trip to South Africa.


cheers
-Rook

[Red_Rook]

wait the second one is not working

[Blue2]

i see one piece...

[Legato]

the marker part is nice up till the water (and less towards the background) the detail work is awesome. i would suggest digitally painting in water to push it over the edge of greatness

[Red_Rook]

mhmm, i need to find myself a new host.
Yeah, it took me forever but i dont really like the for or background the middle is not bad though. Sadly i dont have much experience with digital painting, but its worth a shot. =)

Thanks
-Rook

[pvrhye]

Don't Touch it digitally if it isn't already. Go back into the water with watered down gouche and pull up some waves. That's about the best reccomendation I can give you.

[Red_Rook]

Theres an idea, watered down gouche havent thought of that, ill try though. Thnx for the crits. =)