Game Design Environment Story/Mood Painting- WIP

[wikdotsys]

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[nikia]

I like the first one. Maybe do a bit of detail on the right hand side. Just something barely showing in all that darkness. Eyes or something of the sort might be good. How about a girl on the path? Trying to decide if she's going to go further down the path. It's a good freaky place for a girl.

As for the second one, humm, I like the buildings you can see, but I think you have to much (cloud?) covering the majority of the picture. Kind of hard to tell what it's all about.
Hope this helps a bit.

[Form]

it all depends on wat type of game its for!!

To me the first one is remeniscent of the prerendereds in ff7. Perhaps try raising the cloudline so that the spike things are a bit clearer as they are the most dynamic element of the piece.

The second on looks a bit overworked....like oversaturating natural paper with ink...

good so far

keep up the good work
-form