Fairy Tale Wolf Revised

[teh fonx]

I posted a quick sketch of my take on the wolf from red ryding hood and i recieved some very usefull advice. I had some time today to work up a revision. As always c&c welcome.

http://lazysam.homestead.com/files/Alloutfairytale/ConeptArt/Wolf/wolftest2S.jpg

i revised it a bit, i defenately agree that the chest needed improvement, i think this might be a bit better.

http://lazysam.homestead.com/files/Alloutfairytale/ConeptArt/Wolf/wolftest3S.jpg

[die_with_honor]

needs work chest is a little funky

[teh fonx]

nybody else ?

[Gunbu]

I would leave the top half alone for now and work on the legs a little. I think they should be a little thicker and chunkier at the top. The feet look really good but maybe skwish them a little where they meet the ground to help show they are supporting the weight of the big bad ol' wolf. Also, if I wanna be really picky, I would change the position of the tail. Makes him look a little off balance at the moment. Maybe more in the middle? Anyways, try it if you want, it's still pretty sketchy so it should be easy to play around with it. Overall I like the design, post it when you work on it more!