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hyphen
November 13th, 2003, 11:51 PM
Here's a small piece I've been working on for the past week or so. There are a lot of firsts for me in this project. I've never painted or modelled in 3d before, so please bare with me. I basically carried over one project from my concept class to my 3d modelling class.

COMMENTS AND CRITS MAJORLY WANTED!!!:


My first attempt at painting:

http://erokk1.tripod.com/ogrepaint.txt



A head turnaround to get a better feel for his face:

http://erokk1.tripod.com/ogreface.txt


The low-poly model. Final count was 2030:

http://erokk1.tripod.com/finalwireframe.txt

Cadence
November 14th, 2003, 10:31 AM
Well, I know nothin about using 3D programs, but those head illustrations look sweet! ^_^

JoShuA
November 14th, 2003, 01:10 PM
hyphen, first let me say i like your concept work for this ogre,
looks like you put some thought into it. I like how ugly he is.

but... your model looks like it could look alot better especially at 2030 polys. the disrubution is way off. you need more polys at the chest and torso, and the whole body in general, now that i look at it more closley. I can't really see the face, and I know you were going for asymmetry, so I wont crit it, but the body needs help.

so there's my crit.
if you wanna see some sweet low poly models, like 500 poly, that look like 2000, check out the forums on www.polycount.com

hope this helps.
oh yeah I bet you'd get more replys if you moved your thread to the 3d section.

Bodyrott
November 14th, 2003, 06:30 PM
yeah I'd suggest posting on polycount as well. Post in the pimpin and preview section. There's a lot of people on there who'll give good critiques. However you need to post a bigger picture so we can see whats happening. I have no idea where you put 2030 poly's on that guy cause it's so small :)

Cheers