Character: "Face your fear"

[Waster]

NOW my wacom tablet arrived! HEHEHEH! No more making pictures with that crappy digital mac mouse.

http://www.home.no/devildefender/Behemothsmall.jpg

YES, it is a peaceduck, and NO, that´s NOT green tar dangling from its beak.

Character was submitted to thunderdome contest, but since tablet didn´t arrive before deadline, I didn´t win. Yeah, thats the reason, the tablet didn´t arrive in time.:rolleyes: :D

NOW I MUST GO BACK AND FINISH YOU, STUPID PICTURE!

[imzadione]

Its too blurry, you need to define some of your edges a bit more. The handles of the swords are rendered nicely, but the duck and the figure are way too blurry. Just something i noticed.

[Waster]

I get a feeling its to flat, maybe its the blurry shapes that makes it so? I think because I didnt construct it like I should(Just flung a digital mouse about) , Ive had to focus on eyecatchers like eyes and swords, trying to hide the worst qualities.

A good idea to let the blur go. Thanks. (Well, it can only improve it, right?)

[Legato]

i agree with all of what they said, i would suggest adding maybe some fire in the background and a little more in the front... also... the eyes. they HAVE to go. it makes him look far less baddass than he could be by giving him glowing red slits.

[Waster]

THE PICTURE IS UPDATED.

Oh, forgot about the eyes. He was supposed to cut thinkerbell to pieces, So he was actually focusing right in front of his face. But tincherhell was too small, so I punched in a goose. Fireeyes is a great idea to boost his evil charisma! Will make fireeyes soon. I think there is something wrong with his left shoulder, sort of destroying an otherwise OK compostition... or is it?