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tharmine
November 12th, 2003, 07:45 AM
An image done in Photoshop, working with sky and atmosphere. Comments please !

http://www.shoppinglefilm.net/tc/images/bateau_web.jpg

NOOSE
November 12th, 2003, 07:55 AM
nice paddle!...I liked the view/camera position you chose
:)

jilted_one
November 12th, 2003, 08:53 AM
I like the atmosphere you created, and the basic modelling. I have just one critique, the water is too clean for me, add some noise as a kind of texture to it and i think you'll get the water looking great. Also the boat side needs some age, apart from that the whole scene looks great man.

tharmine
November 12th, 2003, 10:13 AM
Thanks for the comments. Here is a new version with your advices.
http://www.shoppinglefilm.net/tc/images/bateau_web02.jpg

NOOSE
November 12th, 2003, 10:40 AM
OH ya the boat and water look wicked!....just keep the detail level all the way up the paddle and your looking sharp!.

My3blka
November 12th, 2003, 12:54 PM
I think everything is great except I don't really like the sky. The island is lit in such a way that I would expect a bright sky, however the sky turns out to be pretty dark seems flat, like a bunch of smoke is rising from the island. Everything else besides that is cool, nice detail work, nice perspective, etc.